tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2986409090695104447.post5387201854494541270..comments2012-05-09T18:00:10.648-05:00Comments on Heather Rigby's EDM 310: Blog Post 4Heather Rigbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16004086997074867814noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2986409090695104447.post-51478435848629537622011-06-15T17:51:46.003-05:002011-06-15T17:51:46.003-05:00Go back over yoir post. You still have some writin...Go back over yoir post. You still have some writing issues to deal with. See if you can find the problems. If not, let me know and I'll mark up your post. There are not a lot but there are some that should be corrected.<br /><br />Why did the font get so mall in The Virtual Choir piece? <br /><br />Your summaries are very brief. More detail would help. Review my set of instructions on How to Write A Quality Blog Post. For example, read the post <a href="http://edm310.blogspot.com/2011/02/my-response-to-comments-left-on-watson.html" rel="nofollow"> My response to the Comments Left on the Watson vs. Jeopardy Event</a>. In the last half of that post you will find how I did this assignment. Compare it to yours. You missed a lot.John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com