This month I commented on Mogtasid's blog post entitled "A Special Day in Paris" . Mogtasid is a student at Hotspur Primary School in the United Kingdom. In this post Mogtasid wrote about the Eiffel Towers birthday in a very vivid way that took the reader to Paris. My comment to Mogtasid consisted mainly of compliments about the wonderful way of writing used in the post.
My Comment:
Mogtasid,
My name is Heather and I am a student at The University of South Alabama in Dr.Strange’s EDM 310class. You have a wonderful vivid way of writing that puts your reader in the moment that you are writing. I really enjoyed reading about the Eiffel Tower’s birthday. It is almost as if you were there. Were you? Have you ever been? I would love to visit Paris and view all of the lovely sites! Please continue your wonderful writing! I will be writing a review on your post on April 1, 2012 via my blog. You can check it out at Heather Rigby’ s EDM 310 blog Please feel free to leave a comment!
Happy writing!
-Heather
I have not got a reply back as of right now but, I will keep checking.
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